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The Blank Page!

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   Faced with a blank page? Don't know where to start?

This is a simple technique that will get you writing a draft. Once you have a draft there are many ways to develop and improve your writing.

Suppose you are working on the Writing Assignment for the Castaways unit (adapted from The Text Book ed by H. Sykes)

You have selected the news story: Teenagers Overboard.

First brainstorm a list on the topic (This works best if you do it in an interview with a friend):

bulletWho's overboard?
bulletWhat happened?
bulletWhen and where did this happen?
bulletWhat are the rescue efforts?
bulletWhat is the Cruise ship company saying? Ship's Captain?
bulletHow are the families coping?  their friends?

This now becomes a set of headings. Write down the heading and list information. Try to have at least four 'dot' points for each heading. Don't worry about the quality. The aim is to get lots of ides down quickly. Look at the examples below.

1. Who

bulletBill Brown and Jane Smith
bullet18 years old
bulletjust finished school
bulletfrom Casino NSW
bulletBill is a good swimmer and resourceful
bulletJane is a canoeist and has a first aid
bulletBoth reliable and sensible
bullethad some things with them

2. What

bulletcyclone hit ship
bulletpanicked and were on the deck
bullethad gathered up some things from their cabins
bulletswept overboard
bulletlast seen by a crewman who threw them a lifebelt

3. When and where

bulletoff the coast of Vanuatu
bulletlots of small islands
bulletlate last night

You get the idea! Once you have made your 'dot' point lists you have a 'plan'. Is the order of headings OK? Change it if you want to write about things in a different order. This is your PLAN!

Now write your draft. Write a paragraph about each heading, using the dot points. It is ok to leave some dot points out if they don't 'fit' what you are writing. (HINT: give yourself plenty of space here to make changes later eg. wide margins, leave lines between paragraphs) 

Now that you have a draft, revise the draft. Keep in mind:

bulletwho is going to read this?
bulletWhat is the purpose?
bulletWhat style of language should you use?

 

 

 

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