[By Josh, Katherine South Primary,
NT]
One day in Bangbang town, there was a man called Mark, but everyone
called him Mr Maniac. One morning, Mark was driving to the market. He
started to go faster. So he took his foot off the peddle, but the rickshaw
just went even faster. Then Mark found himself on a steep hill. He tried
to stop but he just went faster.
Suddenly he left the hill and came to the markets where there was a
race he had heard about when he was at home. Mark zoomed down the second
hill and turned the corner. He made four cars crash. Then he came to a
tunnel.
[By Zach, Lachlin & Daniel, 234 Heysen, Humpty Doo PS,
NT]
Mr Maniac started to go through the
tunnel.
BUT CRASH!
The tunnel started to collapse. All of a sudden, he was surrounded
by rocks. He tried to ‘rev’ his way out, but then his back tyre popped. So
he got out of his car and tried to push the rocks with his hand. It didn’t
work.
[By Josh, Katherine South Primary,
NT]
But whatever he did, the tyre would not blow up again. Then Mr
Maniac yelled and the tunnel shook and started collapsing. Mark started
running and the tunnel sides collapsed. Mark was trapped in a tomb to
die.
[By Zach, Lachlin & Daniel, 234 Heysen, Humpty Doo PS,
NT]
But then, something happened. It was the police and emergency
services. They came to rescue Mr Maniac from out of the tunnel. They also
came to take Mr Maniac to jail because he made four cars crash. He was a
very dangerous driver. From every night on, Mr Maniac had terrible dreams
about making four cars crash. And in his dreams, he tried to fix
them.