Story Samples

                                                      The Rickshaw Rampage

                                                                                         

[By Alex, Katherine South Primary, NT]
The rickshaw went down into the tunnel and out onto the BMX track. It won the competition without even stopping. The Judge chased the rickshaw on a nuclear missile.
They went through the city.

 

[By Mason, Jesse & Rodney, Humpty Doo PS, NT]
The missile was about to explode. The Judge nearly fell off. The missile was slowing down and a passing Lambergini Diablo was faster. The Judge was worried. He jumped off the missile onto a Harley Davidson motor bike. He hung on tight. He didn't want to get hurt anymore. But, just around the corner…

 

[By Alex, Katherine South Primary, NT]
…there was the city rubbish dump. There was a big rubbish tractor going across the road. It smashed a glass window as it's driver watched the Judge. The Judge then stole a McLaren F1.
The police started to chase the crazed Judge. But the Judge was faster, much too fast to catch.

 

[By Mason, Jesse & Rodney, Humpty Doo PS, NT]
Suddenly, the Judge fell out of the McLaren F1 into a black hole that mysteriously appeared on the road before him. He got sucked up into the sewerage pipes underground. The Judge couldn't get out because he started to turn into a sewergator. He was a terrible sewergator with terrible skin, teeth and smell. The Judge never looked or smelt the same ever again. And just remember, when you go riding a rickshaw down through the tunnels, just stop and listen. You may hear the snapping and the splashing of the mysterious Judge sewergator!

 

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 Copyright. 2002.  Sue Heysen, Humpty Doo Primary School, Northern Territory, Australia